Monday, 28 November 2011

Draft Evaluation

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Lyrics Insert Draft




Digi-pack Insert

From my Questionnaire results, it was evident that my target audience would like to have the lyrics to the artist's songs included in the digi-pack. Because of this, I have decided to create an insert for the digipack with all the lyrics inside.

Mrs D

The digipak works well - although the forth pain could show more print skills. The ending of your promo could link more to the lyrics - it's about him being woken up. You are nearly there and it is all coming together.

Thursday, 24 November 2011

Mrs D

This is much better Hannah. Well done. It is much clearer who you are promoting and you have some fab ideas in terms of the walking, use of pictures and the narrative works well. I'm slightly confused as to why he is 'playing' the guitar when it is a piano in the music. You need to redo these I'm afraid as it doesn't work. The clip of him playing the guitar in the narrative sequence by the fire is great, but the ones on the bench look strange. Keep going - you are nearly there and it is much better.

Tuesday, 22 November 2011

Second Draft of Edited Film

Mrs D

This is a good draft Hannah. You have some effective transitions - I like the use of the dissolve to link the two locations with the fire. Try and get some more filming done and link more to the lyrics.

Filming - Day 3

After I'd made my new decisions about the music promo, I filmed some more scenes with my male actor. This went really well and I was able to film the parts of him singing successfully and then capture the scenes of him walking, which will be sped up in the editing of the film. The only problem I came across was difficulty when using the dolly as I wasn't able to use it on completely flat ground, there it was shakey and produced a shakey image. Other than this, the day filming, went successfully.