Mrs D

This is much better Hannah. Well done. It is much clearer who you are promoting and you have some fab ideas in terms of the walking, use of pictures and the narrative works well. I'm slightly confused as to why he is 'playing' the guitar when it is a piano in the music. You need to redo these I'm afraid as it doesn't work. The clip of him playing the guitar in the narrative sequence by the fire is great, but the ones on the bench look strange. Keep going - you are nearly there and it is much better.