Feedback on First Draft

I have asked my target audience what they think of my first draft to get feedback and to see what I can change to make it better.
Response 1: I like the way the images on screen match the lyrics, so the story is told really well. The scene with the camp fire works really well and the colours look effective and makes you connect with the characters. However I think there are places where it seems a little flat and could do with some scenes that are more dynamic and memorable. I look forward to seeing the stop motion animation.
Response 2: When I watched the music promo, I didn't feel as though I connected well with the actors and think I should especially connect with the male character as he is the artist being sold. I think that there should be some more clips focused more on the artist, but I like the first draft as a whole.
Respone 3: I think the promo is really good and works well with the song, it made me feel happy for the couple. I think there could be a couple of bits tweaked , especially in the living room where the camera is a little bit shaky. Other than that I think the promo works well