Problems with Editing

When it came to editing the film and putting the promo together, I thought the timing was great but the product as a whole lacked-lustre and wouldn't be a memorable music video that the target audience would respond well to. From this, I decided to revise my storyboard and add in some extra clips that would make the audience connect better with the male actor, as he is ultimately the singer and the artist that I want to promote. I have asked my actors if they are able to film again so that I am able to capture these new clips and put them into the music promo and hopefully produce a better outcome.